As Laila decided to caress the shore
Going back in time, he sat there, wishing
She was not a silly coquette
Somewhere he felt ,its much better to have been used as a stepping stone
TC
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Thursday, May 20, 2010
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So let me get this right - you miss Laila and want her to come back? Or you're glad that she was just a one time thing?
I'm confused :-D Nice 4 liner!
@Gayatri
The She & Laila are different...
Laila the Cyclone just missed Chennai !!!
The mood brought one to the shoreline & brought the memories of the SHE !!
LOL
TC
CU
Good seeing you blog after a long long time!!Hoping to see more of your writings:)
ah tht explanation was necessary! :-)
@m.flowerr
Welcome
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@PreethZzZ
Guess so !!
Welcome PreethZzZ
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Oh I was not even as clever as Gayatri to guess tht !!!
@Aarthi
LOL..Welcome
TC
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You need to update.
@Cinderella
Grey matter rusting,gears not meshing...wish I could
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wonderful metaphorical merger here... I like your last post also... you have written it very well...
Laila, if she is violent enough to terrify us, she is worth the miss !! :) Had to look up what coquette meant. Nicely done, sir !! Good to see you after long !!
:):) sweet, funny, triumphant ;-)
Keshi.
@Jaanvi
Thanks Jaanvi .Its been a long time.
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CU
@Keshi
Welcome Keshi ..Ages,where had you been ??
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it liked ur post..try checking out my blog and try commenting on the posts as well..am following u so even u try returning the favour..
www.headacheandtension.blogspot.com
Everyone around me are out of the blogosphere????
Intrigued by your words :)
Hope to see you write more regularly.
@PurpleHeart
Long time. How have you been..Violent ..Hmmm....maybe powerful
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@Jaanvi
metaphor..thats the right guess..thanks for being here
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@Prateek Sur
Will do ,Sur
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@Aarthi
It happens that way ,Aarthi..At least few of us lets wake up from the slumber
Tc
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@Shas
Welcome here after a long time...You have a wonderful post too
TC
CU
khoob bhalo though i understood only aftr reading the explanation. thanks for that.
kamon accho?? sorry i am here after a long time. no net at home plus for last few months was not in good form. much better now. but i thank u for always being there at my blog. truly it means a lot. do drop me a mail sometime at mystique.pree@gmail.com.
khoob bhalo theko :)
No updates?? :(
Been waiting since long to read something written by you.
Sir, so the Laila is the cyclone :O..wondering y the cyclones also have girls names..katrina...rita..
nice post..the 4 lines dint seem that short also..
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