Thursday, May 20, 2010

Oh Laila !!

As Laila decided to caress the shore
Going back in time, he sat there, wishing
She was not a silly coquette
Somewhere he felt ,its much better to have been used as a stepping stone


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26 comments:

Gayatri said...

So let me get this right - you miss Laila and want her to come back? Or you're glad that she was just a one time thing?

I'm confused :-D Nice 4 liner!

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Gayatri

The She & Laila are different...

Laila the Cyclone just missed Chennai !!!

The mood brought one to the shoreline & brought the memories of the SHE !!

LOL
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m.flowerr said...

Good seeing you blog after a long long time!!Hoping to see more of your writings:)

PreethZzZ said...

ah tht explanation was necessary! :-)

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@m.flowerr
Welcome

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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@PreethZzZ
Guess so !!
Welcome PreethZzZ
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Aarthi said...

Oh I was not even as clever as Gayatri to guess tht !!!

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Aarthi

LOL..Welcome
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Cinderella said...

You need to update.

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Cinderella
Grey matter rusting,gears not meshing...wish I could
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Jaanvi said...

wonderful metaphorical merger here... I like your last post also... you have written it very well...

PurpleHeart said...

Laila, if she is violent enough to terrify us, she is worth the miss !! :) Had to look up what coquette meant. Nicely done, sir !! Good to see you after long !!

Keshi said...

:):) sweet, funny, triumphant ;-)

Keshi.

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Jaanvi
Thanks Jaanvi .Its been a long time.
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Keshi
Welcome Keshi ..Ages,where had you been ??
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Prateek Sur said...

it liked ur post..try checking out my blog and try commenting on the posts as well..am following u so even u try returning the favour..
www.headacheandtension.blogspot.com

Aarthi said...

Everyone around me are out of the blogosphere????

Shas said...

Intrigued by your words :)
Hope to see you write more regularly.

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@PurpleHeart

Long time. How have you been..Violent ..Hmmm....maybe powerful

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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Jaanvi

metaphor..thats the right guess..thanks for being here
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Prateek Sur

Will do ,Sur
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Aarthi
It happens that way ,Aarthi..At least few of us lets wake up from the slumber

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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Shas
Welcome here after a long time...You have a wonderful post too
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Preetilata【ツ】 said...

khoob bhalo though i understood only aftr reading the explanation. thanks for that.

kamon accho?? sorry i am here after a long time. no net at home plus for last few months was not in good form. much better now. but i thank u for always being there at my blog. truly it means a lot. do drop me a mail sometime at mystique.pree@gmail.com.

khoob bhalo theko :)

Sh@s said...

No updates?? :(
Been waiting since long to read something written by you.

Unknown!!! said...

Sir, so the Laila is the cyclone :O..wondering y the cyclones also have girls names..katrina...rita..
nice post..the 4 lines dint seem that short also..