Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Thavam :: the penance

Thavamirinden Avalai meendum peruvadarkaga
Indru than puridadhu andha Izhappe oru Mayae endru
Thavamirundadhu Edarkaga ?


I was in penance to get her back
Just realised the loss itself was a Maya
What for was I doing the penance

16 comments:

ceedy said...

Brilliant...less speaks a lot here...

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

Superb!!!!

Thinking said...

hmmm....nice post...left a bit thirst for more....

Kiran Bajaj Sawhney said...

I could not understand.

Sh@s said...

Well-said. This life is nothing but an illusion and we keep chasing this illusion till the very last breath of our lives.

Anonymous said...

Sweetly painful!

Raghu

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@ceedy
Thanks ceedy for a comment like tha
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Preetilata【ツ】
Thank you, bhalo theko
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Thinking
Thank you,that was nice to hear it left a lingering thirst..
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Kiran Bajaj Sawhney
Welcome kiran,we keep chasing things ,but then they are all around & perhaps with us
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Sh@s
well said Sh@s.. and finally donno its all worth it & besides they are just there with you
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Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Anonymous
Thats a nice coinage Raghu
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Sh@s said...

I just came across a translation of Tagore's poem "Ungrateful Sorrow" and found some semblance of it in your post so thought of sharing it with you. If you know Bangla then read it in the original, here's the link: http://www.indolink.com/Poetry/tagore14.html

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Sh@s
that was nice of you of you to have thought about my two liner ,sorry three liner when reading the great mans poetry..yeah I read it through your link, so wonderfully he has expressed it...But then Great man or Small fry like me, a loss brings out the same anger in a human..perhaps

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thanks again Sh@s

Preethi said...

poignant ... and philosophical!! loved it

Compassion Unlimitted said...

@Preethi
Welcome & thanks Preethi . Its been a long time..hope everything is fine with you & family
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