Hi Honey,how are you da, I have just reached Narita..I should be reaching Chennai tomorrow night ..said Rajesh
Why tomorrow night da,its been a week already..said Suparna
Not getting the connecting at Changi da,Can you take the trouble of making a room booking in the transit hotel at Changi .You know its eternally under renovation and on arrival I may not get accomodation.I just want to rest for sometime there da.Please..
Come on why dont you ask your pet secretary Anju to do it,I am sure you would be talking to her every halh an hour ,on some pretext or other
Come on honey,ever since she joined the company you have been pulling my legs
Sure da will do the booking.Still, please make a last minute attempt to make it by the earlier flight da..missing you one hell
Same here too da
Suparna and Rajesh,a wonderful couple,both working very hard to achieve what they deserve.Dinks by choice,they were looked upon as ideal couple by all and sundry.Always full of fun and laughter,snatching time for themselves between their busy schedules and endless travel.
Recently Suparna had joined a MNC and was literally drowned in work 20 hours a day and Rajesh busy expanding his business in Japan. Suparna was slightly uncomfortable with the behaviour of her boss Praramb and had mentioned this to Rajesh .Her boss made her uncomfortable by asking many personal questions and sort of acting fresh ,but was well short of what could be called as harrasment..Her saviour was her peer Rohit who understood her problems and often doubled up and completed some of her assignments very subtly.Suparna was grateful to him.She was particularly worried when she was travelling with her boss,but fairly comfortable travelling with Rohit.
Of late she felt she was being stalked but couldnt clearly make out who it was.She started imagining it could be Praramb. She confided in Rajesh about her discomfort.Rajesh assured her that it was purely figment of her imagination arising out of her dislike for her boss,who was much elder to her and wouldnt be doing such a thing ,especially when awareness was on penalty for harrasment was high.
One day Suparna confided this to her best friend in office Renu and good friend Rohit.He adviced her to ignore it and these things would get solved by themselves.
Renu ,said her brother being a senior officer in crime branch of police and it would be best if she took his suggestion.Rohit was uncomfortable with the idea and felt involvement of police would not be advisable.Suparna being a modern girl wanted to hold the bull by its horn and requested Renu to go ahead discussing it with her brother.
The next morning Suparna left for Hydrabad,and as she was returning back to chennai,she again felt she was being stalked but really couldnt pin point who it was.
The next two days in Chennai,she didnt have any respite.
As she was drowned in her work,late in the evening Renu walked in and sat across..
Suparna,my brother called up .
Its like this,its true this guy has been stalking you.They caught hold of him and took a confessional statement from him......
Suparna thought to herself,so it was true and as Renu continued the monolog she was drained off her energy..
Realising her state Renu dropped her home.
Back at home ,lying on the couch ,the entire thing was going in her mind again and again...
WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME RAJESH
Rajesh had hired a private detective agency to keep a tab on Suparna..and when the police arrested the shadow man, he let out everything
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CU
Monday, February 11, 2008
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For a while i thought i had been watching a movie:).Narration is wonderful!
@m.flowerr
Welcome..that was a good one..lol..thanks
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CU
U always create suspense...... I thought it wud be someone else..
Again as always, Vry Good Story to read...
@Sandhya
welcome Sandhya ! Suspence ia also a spice of life isnt it !!
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CU
Thank you for another wonderful story sir!!!!!
These are spices of the modern society....dinks, late works hours, friends/secretary more in touch then parents/spouses, travel and loneliness.....
all ingrediants that create the insecurity....a new phase of understanding this has to be developed....till then I think I will open a detective agency :)
@ c e e d y
Absolutely true..Insecurity ,the demon in disguise !!
Well,it manifests in different forms and result is the detective agencies..Great business acumen friend !
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CU
lol I thought it was Rohit.. really nice twist... as always.. weelcome back.. have missed your stories!!
same question...why ?
@Preethi
Thanks Preethi ..that was nice of you..Last time, friends missed the twist ..lol
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@backpakker
WHY ? If only this three letter word could be answered,thousands or more of martriages would have been in tact .
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CU
Interesting writeup CU!
Great twist to it too.
Keshi.
@ Keshi
Welcome, Keshi ..Thanks !!
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enne kathai enne kathai...great..nice story! anyway happy valentines day
@ anits
Summa oru kathai sonnen..just like that..LOL
Thanks for the wishes and reciprocate from here !!
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Its very sad Rajesh hired a detective to spy on her and not protect her:( kuithi budhdhi, as amma would put it:)
wah!! wah!! yenna twist...worth the wait...:D
@Ziah,
Lawyer ma,agreed intoto to your statement.sila nerangalil sila manidhargal..thats life !
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@Thinking aloud ,
Lol, but sad isnt it !!
I see your Tamizh improving,Singapore effect or remnants of Bangalooru !!
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Its always so depressing to hear that the husband resorts to such devious means....looks like the trust is going on a hike here....nice story
@Prats
Very true Prats ..it hurts
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inspired by you - i have also written a short story - when you have time do read it :)
we do hear a lot of tamil in singapore...but this is remnants of my 4 year stay in good old madras...as it was called then..did the last part of my schooling there...
@ c e e d y
Hey friend thats nice of you..will definitely go over to your site
Thanks again
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@Thinking aloud
Wow Suma..You need to write a blog or more on experiences of Madras /Chennai !!
How about that !!
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CU
did ya miss my V-day post? LOL!
Keshi.
@Keshi
Oh,Keshi ! I did miss reading it,but did not miss the valentine day !!
Right there reading ur post in 10 secs !!
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CU
yay! the story teller is back with the twists:-)& that was really good..
it's amazing what insecurity can lead us into being... nice story. i've had a fren who actually went thru this crap! she eventually left her husband... after she realized that he was d one who was having an affair, while she was being followed by a PI!!
@Vishnupriya Janardhanan
Wow,what a welcome to the story teller in me .Thanks Thanks And Thanks !!!...LOL
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@rayshma
welcome rayshma !!
Amazing isnt it.. sometimes people want to have the cake and eat too !!!
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a one month break? nallathukku illae saar [:P]
ungalloda paeru compassion unlimited oda twist-unlimited nu vecha innum poruthamma irukkum nu ninaikkuraen [:)]
@ crazyBugga
Vaanga Thambi..Kathai vittune irundha eppa velai seyyarathu ?Athanaale konjam kadhai konjam velai..Pozhappa paakanum illa
Pudhu per verayaa enakku..nadakkattum..lol
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CU
gosh, i hope in real life hubbies are not like this :|
Hi CU,
Nice write up.Seems insecurity makes a person go mad...
Tc.
@Gayatri
I didt want to scare you with this STORY..in real life mn are extremely sweet !!
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@Joy
Welcome joy !! long time here !!
True.. confidence and trust are the best counter to the insecuriy which envelops one and finally chokes the person
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CU
nice thriller..:-)
Ohhhh...But that's crazy...!!!!
As usual sooper suspense Tamizhan...! :)
Oops............:(
@Vinesh
Hi.Long time Vinesh .How u doing ?
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@Curious
Welcome Curious..Crazy stuff do happen isnt it ?
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@Aarthi
Your comment said it all..lol
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nice one:):) the twist was unexpected..:)
so wil the relationship be strained henceforth? hard to face the fact tat ur own partner does not trust u rite?
am nt talkin about the post. in general-a kekkaraen
I thought it was Rajesh himself, but happen's to be that he is behind it. Dont you think its a bit cliched?
I liked your narrative though. :)
Wow, that was an interesting story dude. Quite a suspense and climax was superb. Keep up the good work.
Cheerio
Shantini
@Sindhu
Welcome..Twists !! people have branded me for that,though the twist itself was not intentional
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@ crazyBugga
Appadiillapa..but these things also happen..unfortunately in my experience,men seem to be aggressively possesive and suspicious
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@Vidya
Cliched..possible..the way as one looks at it
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@whAt A LiFe
Welcome..good to know you liked it..keep passing by !!
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hi CU!
Keshi.
very nice story. Liked it. As they say trust is a key to make relationships work.
still stalked? aww :)
Keshi.
what's up? no new kadhai?
Now now!!! Yenge pudhu kathai.....stalking or stalked????
hey cu....nothing interesting worth blogging?
I have just deployed my best detective to find out the wherebouts of CU.....so you can run but cannot hide :)
@Sumana
Hi..thanks for ur words
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@Keshi
Will be out of my foxhole soon Keshi
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@ Thinking aloud
Hi Suma.Lots of kadhais in the head only that I am managing my time as miserably as i can
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@Prats
Hi welcome..pudhu kadhai just in a few moments
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@m.flowerr
Here it is shortly !!
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@c e e d y
Hi friend..Before Mr Sherlock Holmes homes on me I am out with the next story friend !!
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Wow..awesome twist. Had not guessed at all. Could be part of a movie!
@Solitaire
Welcome..First time here I guess..Thanks for the words..Keep passing by
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ohh this came as a surprise!!
i was expecting it to be 'rohit' :D
well written!!
@Pri
These kind of things happen in real life too
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CU
Sad...in today's jet-set life trust goes out of the window. Enjoyed your narration. You should take up writing seriously and get your stories published. Do think about it seriously.
@Sh@s
Trust.hmm...If only it was available in Supermarket or a Mall one would buy it,perhaps ony during discount season.lol
Thats nice of you Sh@s to share your encouraging views on the writes !
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